If this sounds like you, then please share your story. Don't tell them a story you think they want, tell them what YOU want.
It was a macabre little composition, but it was about exactly what was on my mind at the time I was writing it. Colleges are looking for a sense of maturity and introspection—pinpoint the transformation and demonstrate your personal growth.
Admissions officers want to know about you, your personality and emotions. It should be people who know you best and want you to succeed. Over the course of the six weeks, I became very familiar with playing the cello, the flute, the trumpet, and the marimba in the morning session while I continually learned how to play the acoustic guitar in the afternoon sessions.
Now I can really begin. Without the photographs, the descriptions are cryptic. Its light sensors on the alert, it sensed that something was near.
Yes, I'll admit I'm a predisposed meditation fan. And trust that your perfect-fit college will see you for who truly you are and say "Yes!
It definitely broadened my considerations for what I should write for my essay, though today I haven't the faintest idea what I ended up writing.